Popular Post Bashaw Steel Posted October 23, 2013 Popular Post Report Share Posted October 23, 2013 As the moving force of the many things, poetry deserves its places here, dont you think?:) Tell me where dreams speak the truth Where all my illusions are more than dust And although there is no eternal youth There is something else… Higher than hope and deeper than faith Something different than all routines Where our souls deserves to rest After being freed… Choose me over the world Ignite the passion within the dying So they may be also free When their time turns to nothing… Intrigue, Jubaris, klatdees and 7 others 10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted October 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2013 this poem is special as the person to whom its dedicated :)) keeping friends, one of the virtues i know, but tend to forget easily:( Secret in the Steel As always, blank piece of paper That screams at me with its whiteness Much like the storm of the dreamer And nothing like the silence… Secret in the Steel Where are all those, promised words? Lost somewhere between the lines I`m cursed to seek something there Which cannot be found A secret in the Steel… And it is there where did i learned From someone who appear just as small That true strength is to forgive Not to destroy… A secret to one that is known to her Smile hidden under all those masks Many of which cannot be heard By the cry of the past… Secret in forgiving… Jubaris, Intrigue, Syrian and 4 others 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Fall oath I have Sun frozen in my soul Its purpose forgotten but its dreams endure Whos will to burn is only matched By the embrace of its icy cull... It is not a power given, to use it at my own free will But a curse bestowed gently So me too could endure the burden that comes with it With power... Scent of summer carried upon the wind of hearts Where my hopes are standing still In the gardens of eternal fall My golden chains... It is not the fear itself It is not the outcome of this battle But something more than both More than me... Eagle Eye, John Constantine and Summer breeze 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer breeze Posted November 15, 2013 Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 Bashaw, do you want only original poems here. or can you place your favorites here too? :unsure: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 15, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 original:) to feel the poem is to feel the fraction of poet`s soul it does not need to be grand or immortal poem of well known artist "just" some honest, deep verses of immortal spirit :)) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer breeze Posted November 15, 2013 Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 Wow, then I have to translate my most dearest poem first. Thank you for your answer. :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 15, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 to translate a poem? that is rare and remarkable talent, as most meanings of verses are lost in translation, you need to know those languages extremely well while feeling the poem in both.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer breeze Posted November 15, 2013 Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 So i can't join this quest, I don't read Montenegron, you don't read Dutch. I wrote some pretty good onces, but how can I let you read them? :huh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ary Endleg Posted November 15, 2013 Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 this is a quest? :huh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Root Admin Chewett Posted November 15, 2013 Root Admin Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 this is a quest? :huh: from the look of it no Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 15, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2013 ahahah, it is not quest:D well, poetry is primarily meant for its "native" language dont know :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer breeze Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 Bashaw, I still don't get it. You want people to make new poems in English here? :unsure: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Root Admin Chewett Posted November 16, 2013 Root Admin Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 Bashaw, I still don't get it. You want people to make new poems in English here? :unsure: Read what he wrote ahahah, it is not quest:D well, poetry is primarily meant for its "native" language dont know :( What he means is that poetry is best in its natural language. Translations can make a wonderful poem ugly. If you are posting poems here, post them in english. But he welcomes if you try to translate your poems. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 that is right:)) if you can write poems, write on english, dont translate ones you wrote on your native language, although i would like to see such effort:) so put some verses guys, i`m looking forward to it :)) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer breeze Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 No pain, no words No dreams or hopes I lost it all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2013 although the some of greatest poets have that rare "power" to put one poem in few verses, even in one verse... your poem is deep but painfully precise, it lacks the question it suits you well though;) "I was killed by a word too strong" (ubi me prejaka rijec)-branko miljkovic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer breeze Posted November 17, 2013 Report Share Posted November 17, 2013 Winter, cold And then all of a sudden There is spring Blossom gonzalocsdf95 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 much better:) dont write poems if you are "dry", wait for inspiration :)) Azrafar 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted November 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Take me by the hand, shrouded in ice Remove the ring that has all winters Take my soul away from the sight From cold sorrow`s fiery fingers… Where it cant reach light of the dawn Frozen in time, in my own escape Spare the suffering from my mind And my smile from the hate… Truth is never what soul would want What white lies are hidden beneath How to get Steel sky of my head And clouded ground under my feet… gonzalocsdf95 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted December 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 I see you as the wind, trapped In the hair of the past Screaming with no one to hear How those chains are not so vast But which holds your dreams so very near... And still, you cant reach them The distance measured by strides of time And every second, every hope you hold dear Is taken away in the hair of the past... I see you as phoenix Immortal soul in flames of battle Every feather an unyielding mark Of conquered death, from imprisoned life... Never stop! Never falter and back away Never be the spark When you can be, when you are Eternal flame in ocean of the dark... Jubaris, gonzalocsdf95, Sunfire and 2 others 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted January 31, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 Touched of light and cast into darkness To dream about all things that should be lived Lost in songs and embraced by Silence To live the things that should be dreamed… And cursing the moments that didnt happen So long ago, as they should be Instead of them there is only Silence Part of my soul, universe of my wish… Waiting for that song, that will never end For her words, in which heaven sleep Seeking for the music that will never rest Across her voice, across eternity… Jubaris, Neno Veliki, Eara Meraia and 2 others 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubaris Posted January 31, 2014 Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 Powerful words, young enchanter. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bashaw Steel Posted January 31, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 "verses":P ahahhaahhah, thank you:)) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
petty dodds Posted January 31, 2014 Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 ah...I shall give wit to one on the spur. I will take three objects from in front of me at this desk and then write a few lines of prose speaker light picture On light obscured paper, bind a picture from the mortal mind of thoughts of bliss and agony, on dreams of love and felony. The speaker tells a truth of sorts A photo captures light but thwarts a vision of mind's feelings there the unseen verse, tangential fare. Lania, Ungod and Bashaw Steel 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ackshan Bemunah Posted January 31, 2014 Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 (edited) [SIGSEGV] Edited November 12, 2014 by Ackshan Bemunah Hedge Munos, Bashaw Steel, Intrigue and 1 other 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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