Root Admin Muratus del Mur Posted September 16, 2010 Root Admin Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 (edited) O.o ... I dream of ducks, thats what i dream of endless shapes, and abstract steam I dream of ducks, its my obsession of color rhymes and bit progression I dream of ducks, and happy clouds the song of trance and hypno sounds In case you wonder, nothing's wrong I dream of ducks, ...is just a song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PM6hh-OlnMU I case you question why i write A poem of such pointless type I could explain, to try i could Why neurons have left the hood But better still, just enjoy The day insanity became my toy Muhahhahahahahaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. uck=rug ha..ha..Joke! laugh!...now :| why so serious pssst..i [b]see[/b] voices!..shht..DON'T LOOK now stop reading, comments are useless Edited September 16, 2010 by Muratus del Mur Asterdai 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amoran Kalamanira Kol Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 You are either.. 1. Extremely happy 2. In a silly mood while being extremely happy. 3. Hyped up on caffine while being extremely happy. 4. Or you are drunk and extremely happy. 5. A combination of all of the above. Ducks and kittens are adorable, gotta say. /end of useless comment. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Root Admin Muratus del Mur Posted September 16, 2010 Author Root Admin Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 (edited) ah yeeey.. i am so ..happy.. as you say? oh pray, my feelings are indeed that way is comic how we joke about the tragic a trick that makes our life more magic laugh symbolism pure self defence mechanism invisible schism bending thoughts like a prism this comedy a self destructing parody you see? now where that happiness in me? now run! fear the madness behind fun hide hun i'm two seconds from my gun p.s u made me smile , yey..time to polish the jigsaw for a new beneficiary ..mmh..mhha..mhahahhaaa *paranoid twitch* Edited September 16, 2010 by Muratus del Mur Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amoran Kalamanira Kol Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 Yay! Smiling is good! Smile more!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awiiya Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 As much as I thought the majority of your other poetry was mediocre at best, this free-thought poetry grabs me. Although it was not your intention to impress, or perhaps because it was not your intention, I am impressed. Awi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarquinus Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 the crux of ducks is bucks for schmucks, apostate from a prostate view. a dithered withered leather lathered? Sucks! eclipse my name, encompass you. Amoran Kalamanira Kol and Asterdai 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aysun Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 Ducks are incredibly awesome anyway. I didn't know neurons lived in the 'hood, either. Are they also packing heat? "Raise 'em high!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Root Admin Muratus del Mur Posted September 16, 2010 Author Root Admin Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 this is the ALTERNATE romanian version, its not ment to be translated because its all about the language used, twisted sense of humor, soory i did this as a test..since all romanians here on this form know english already.someone share an opinion if its worth to alter content of poeam, even badly,if it keep similar if not identical info sring. a..ha. sunt fericit nu-i asa? ai vrea sa fie totul chiar asa e comic cum ne batem joc de tragic un truc ce schimba viata magic rasul tare acest mecanism de autoaparare invizibila separare intre ce e nostim si ce doare fericit?..fie ca intr-o sinistra parodie ei bine unde-i oare fericirea-n mine acum besi muta-ti copitele de pe presi hai valea moaca ta imi optureaza calea ... unfortunatly the mur is not fully upgraded yet so i am unable to test it in the first poem to compare Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyphis the Bard Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 (edited) You've gone mad! ... I like it >: D Edited September 16, 2010 by Kyphis the Bard Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageWoman Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 *nerve tick goes off by her right eye* Hail the Mad! Hail the Sad! Those who hide behind the Mask. Poetry like ours is Bad. Ducks! Yes! Kittens? Aw! I bet they forgot the mittens. Alas I suck at this So I bow out with your permittence. Asterdai and Watcher 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(Zl-eye-f)-nea Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 I'm with Awi, I especially like post 3 its very...like lyrical spitting. Also...ace song. Z Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asterdai Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 (edited) [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2dfGC1oziE[/media] That duck got stuck in the mud of your spluuuuurge Plick Plock Pluck out of the muck so whats it to be.. Chuck? tick tock, choke block take it back, forward rock short crop, flip n drop break step, checking out out Out out. of. check. Poison lips grip, grab Hold it now hold. that. draaaaag ears ache, head snakes ears ache, head snakes Edited September 16, 2010 by Asterdai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Marvolo Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 What do you say when you're shooting a Duck? .. .. Duck!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grido Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 (edited) Have to agree with Awii on that one, it really grabs me, bit of a varied response on my part i am mAd crazy they say, quite angry i write to speak, my lyrical inSanity my brain fires sHots, the man is deAd, stabbed himself five times with a knife in the heaD the duck iS dead, the quAcks and quicks were playing on my mind, like a little football ditch i dreAm of pretty pictures, rainBows with the clouds, the rain hitting down afAr like a big old car running down the gRounds my obSession with perfection and nothing perfect rhymes everyThing i say is wrong noThing ever lie except me, and them, and you, and i, in case you wonder why i state it is beCause i cannot hate explain i cannot, should not, do i type so write, i typ so rong do not commeant i can not think read not what you canNot see i cannot see but you or me i am happy, fear me run from my smiling fist gaze upon my visAge and despair i am a comic book wham, poof, kaplook i trick you into seeing what you want to see the truth my lie i spy wIth my little eye someThing beginning with r trap doors, trip wires too i set them up to watch them blow my mind, too much infonation i think a lot of toffee in the morning self destruct 5 4 3 2 1 bang, kaboom i am deAd i see your head in the basket aLong with a magazine talk to me and you shall see how crazy you might truly be bzZzz for the honey bzzzZ off do not disturb i'm not tired any more a nugget of gold 13 pieces of silver i canNot be sold nor bought for a giraffe leave now, forEver hold your piece i am not here any more i am gone the next room is so far away like a ship over the horizon Edited September 17, 2010 by Grido(polis) Asterdai and Watcher 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Root Admin Muratus del Mur Posted September 17, 2010 Author Root Admin Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 u liked the 1st or the second? ..because the second just came out as i was trying to reply strange things happen around 6am ..again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asterdai Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Well it gave me some inspiration. i actually went and found a song that was similer (in my eyes) to the one you had, which helped me its interesting how music can affect poetry, i hadnt tried it before Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.