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I see... I'll edit it. But how should I format it? And what changes can I make?

Really? Even if it takes the the friendly creature vitality too? Awww Anything I can change to make it better?

I don't know. But there should definitely be a sign for all the rules there. Like... You MUST have a non-damage def rit set up You CANNOT attack with damage and stuff like that...

Yeah... I'll add it... ------------------------------------------------------- Oh I'm sorry I never really got the chance to post my creature idea. I'll do that right now Twilit Egg des-This egg lets off a pinkish glow and as you hold it in your bare hands you grow tired and you notice yourself slowing down. It starts to scare you but you should keep it to wait to see what grows inside... power-1 def-1 ve-100 ability-weaken Twilit Senile des-An ugly creature like this one probably doesn't make sense coming out of an egg. It is a faerie-like creature that sports baggy and wrinkling skin. It's dull expression is depressing and tiring. It's hair is long and straight and goes longer than it's feet. You find it is too stupid to be of any use to you but you should keep it anyways. Besides, it has an interesting new power... power-2 def-1 ve-150 init-5 ability-lifesteal target-single Twilit Senile II des-As you age with the Twlit Senile you notice that its growth is different. You see the same old hair and the same expression on it's disgusting face but it's wrinkles and skin blemishes are disappearingg and it looks much younger than before. Not only that but it's power is growing as well... power-4 def-2 ve-150 init-5 ability-lifesteal target-single Twilit Siren des-It's body is that of a young woman now. And it is no longer a helpless fairy and its power is more powerful now. It's hair is silky and smooth. The face and body of the siren draws in it's enemies only to be stripped of it's life. It can affect everyone around it. power-6 def-25 ve-1000 init-10 ability-lifesteal target-multi (I'm hoping to give it a few special abilities) [depressing aura]Takes half of all friendly creatures vitality and keeps it for itself. [captivating aura] Makes all creatures focus all of their attacks on it. This aura effects even multi target creatures. ------------------------------------------------------------ I seriously hope that people will like this idea. But I'm sure it can be edited and some things should be changed. SHOUTS-You people should comment and criticize me! Now I'l see if any other ideas pop in my head... ------------------------------------------------------------ Eeeek. People are reading it! Oh and to the people that say that lifestealers would be a problem... Do you think I should add a power that could lower lifestealers powers? Hm... How about this... [captivating aura updated] Makes all creatures focus their DAMAGE attacks on it? Should the aura not affect lifestealers? I think that could make the creature even better since with other creatures having low vitality the lifesteal would be less effective. [color="purple"](Merges) There's an EDIT button for a reason, use it - Grido[/color] So what do people think of the other captivating aura? Or is the first one better?

:good: I like all of them. Oh and tarquinus has lots of big words

[b]I see more life than you do[/b] The path that has dust and leaves the one I see untouched by others I see less people and I see more life that is the path I take where the stars shine better at night and the sun shines through the leaves the grass is greener And the path that has cement and rocks the hard asphalt it has grown into civilization and you see less life and more people that is the path that you take where the fire replaces the stars at night the rush replaces the speed We go our separate ways and takes many days and we grow tired we will both fall on our knees and we can't pick each other up we are separate but you end up with a larger scar more hurt than me (something I came up with randomly) I hope it makes sense to everyone that reads it *finishes reading everyone's poetry* It looks like everyone is so caught up in colorful vocabulary. Their's shows yellow and green Mine shows purple and red I wish I could come up with colorful poetry. Hm...