October 23, 201312 yr Popular Post comment_145975 As the moving force of the many things, poetry deserves its places here, dont you think?:) Tell me where dreams speak the truth Where all my illusions are more than dust And although there is no eternal youth There is something else… Higher than hope and deeper than faith Something different than all routines Where our souls deserves to rest After being freed… Choose me over the world Ignite the passion within the dying So they may be also free When their time turns to nothing… Report
October 25, 201312 yr Author comment_146023 this poem is special as the person to whom its dedicated :)) keeping friends, one of the virtues i know, but tend to forget easily:( Secret in the Steel As always, blank piece of paper That screams at me with its whiteness Much like the storm of the dreamer And nothing like the silence… Secret in the Steel Where are all those, promised words? Lost somewhere between the lines I`m cursed to seek something there Which cannot be found A secret in the Steel… And it is there where did i learned From someone who appear just as small That true strength is to forgive Not to destroy… A secret to one that is known to her Smile hidden under all those masks Many of which cannot be heard By the cry of the past… Secret in forgiving… Report
November 13, 201312 yr Author comment_146599 Fall oath I have Sun frozen in my soul Its purpose forgotten but its dreams endure Whos will to burn is only matched By the embrace of its icy cull... It is not a power given, to use it at my own free will But a curse bestowed gently So me too could endure the burden that comes with it With power... Scent of summer carried upon the wind of hearts Where my hopes are standing still In the gardens of eternal fall My golden chains... It is not the fear itself It is not the outcome of this battle But something more than both More than me... Report
November 15, 201312 yr comment_146635 Bashaw, do you want only original poems here. or can you place your favorites here too? :unsure: Report
November 15, 201312 yr Author comment_146639 original:) to feel the poem is to feel the fraction of poet`s soul it does not need to be grand or immortal poem of well known artist "just" some honest, deep verses of immortal spirit :)) Report
November 15, 201312 yr comment_146648 Wow, then I have to translate my most dearest poem first. Thank you for your answer. :o Report
November 15, 201312 yr Author comment_146652 to translate a poem? that is rare and remarkable talent, as most meanings of verses are lost in translation, you need to know those languages extremely well while feeling the poem in both.. Report
November 15, 201312 yr comment_146656 So i can't join this quest, I don't read Montenegron, you don't read Dutch. I wrote some pretty good onces, but how can I let you read them? :huh: Report
November 15, 201312 yr Root Admin comment_146658 this is a quest? :huh: from the look of it no Report
November 15, 201312 yr Author comment_146662 ahahah, it is not quest:D well, poetry is primarily meant for its "native" language dont know :( Report
November 16, 201312 yr comment_146683 Bashaw, I still don't get it. You want people to make new poems in English here? :unsure: Report
November 16, 201312 yr Root Admin comment_146687 Bashaw, I still don't get it. You want people to make new poems in English here? :unsure: Read what he wrote ahahah, it is not quest:D well, poetry is primarily meant for its "native" language dont know :( What he means is that poetry is best in its natural language. Translations can make a wonderful poem ugly. If you are posting poems here, post them in english. But he welcomes if you try to translate your poems. Report
November 16, 201312 yr Author comment_146689 that is right:)) if you can write poems, write on english, dont translate ones you wrote on your native language, although i would like to see such effort:) so put some verses guys, i`m looking forward to it :)) Report
November 17, 201312 yr Author comment_146721 although the some of greatest poets have that rare "power" to put one poem in few verses, even in one verse... your poem is deep but painfully precise, it lacks the question it suits you well though;) "I was killed by a word too strong" (ubi me prejaka rijec)-branko miljkovic Report
November 17, 201312 yr comment_146725 Winter, cold And then all of a sudden There is spring Blossom Report
November 18, 201312 yr Author comment_146752 much better:) dont write poems if you are "dry", wait for inspiration :)) Report
November 24, 201312 yr Author comment_146962 Take me by the hand, shrouded in ice Remove the ring that has all winters Take my soul away from the sight From cold sorrow`s fiery fingers… Where it cant reach light of the dawn Frozen in time, in my own escape Spare the suffering from my mind And my smile from the hate… Truth is never what soul would want What white lies are hidden beneath How to get Steel sky of my head And clouded ground under my feet… Report
December 2, 201312 yr Author comment_147131 I see you as the wind, trapped In the hair of the past Screaming with no one to hear How those chains are not so vast But which holds your dreams so very near... And still, you cant reach them The distance measured by strides of time And every second, every hope you hold dear Is taken away in the hair of the past... I see you as phoenix Immortal soul in flames of battle Every feather an unyielding mark Of conquered death, from imprisoned life... Never stop! Never falter and back away Never be the spark When you can be, when you are Eternal flame in ocean of the dark... Report
January 31, 201412 yr Author comment_149259 Touched of light and cast into darkness To dream about all things that should be lived Lost in songs and embraced by Silence To live the things that should be dreamed… And cursing the moments that didnt happen So long ago, as they should be Instead of them there is only Silence Part of my soul, universe of my wish… Waiting for that song, that will never end For her words, in which heaven sleep Seeking for the music that will never rest Across her voice, across eternity… Report
January 31, 201412 yr comment_149262 ah...I shall give wit to one on the spur. I will take three objects from in front of me at this desk and then write a few lines of prose speaker light picture On light obscured paper, bind a picture from the mortal mind of thoughts of bliss and agony, on dreams of love and felony. The speaker tells a truth of sorts A photo captures light but thwarts a vision of mind's feelings there the unseen verse, tangential fare. Report
January 31, 201412 yr comment_149263 [SIGSEGV] Edited November 12, 201411 yr by Ackshan Bemunah Report
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