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I have no idea what's going on with this novel anymore. At least i'm naming names. +2 next week, sooooory.

No chapter this week, sorry. The wear and tear of routine, plus my dislike of the overall current political environment. I kinda drafted the draft of chapter 9, its not up to par. There are several more reasons for this, some are simple, some are not i assume..or not.We will have the chapter 9-10 next week, sorry and happy MD birthday.

Chapter 8 - Suspension My English is failing me hard. What to do? Also can't name anything, i welcome any name suggestions, or if you want to be featured no problem. I'll try to be nice.

Chapter 7 - I'll gen Haha!. No

I was thinking automated resource gains. Your idea is better. I personally like mercenary type work. Isn't this already covered with the current system, anyone can put bounties if they wish, am i wrong? Perhaps current Kings/ Queens should own the lands by default. And they could lose/gain their authority based on their rule and ownership. And perhaps it could be designed so it would be very difficult to perform coups / topple them. Question is how to integrate this type of stat? And is the fun worth the cost? Perhaps authority =~ honor can be converted to each other like loyalty. That's not difficult, also would it make sense in the long term? A coup everyday at Necro? Why not, could be fun. For example Azull is a great king ofc, but should he rule eternally until a better king appears? Or should he have to stamp out dissidents? That's a big No in general. Perhaps a branch etc.. for a fee is fine. I mean think about it, Necrovion could charge more than anyone. *evil laugh* Sounds good to me? Though not particularly related to ownership or how would they.

Chapter 6 - 666 Guys, i'm sorry, i know this chapter is kinda bad/sucks. Not a particularly great week for me. So i decided for a light/quick/fast chapter. So ehrm.. if you somewhat care, I promise the novel will get better.

Congrats you've adopted my speech style. To make spells work in MD is a gigantic monumental work if you think about balancing issues. Current system(last i remember) is very cutting edge already, to make it somehow more practical & intuitive. Though again i must say perhaps, ease the requirements so shy and lazy people can go to MD6 too.

I'm not privy to the latest developments, or fixing the economy. The water dowsing is the last job i remember. I was thinking about this earlier. What makes an economy go? You can work and work in MD and gather stuff, how about owning something? Like a business. You can make someone work or you can own the entire Lands, Marind's Bell for example. Wouldn't this also encourage players to pay more for MD? Hardworking is nice and all at paper but it never works quite well with people. If It seems stupid to pay money to become king, perhaps there should be some other ways to the throne as well. Sorry if this sounds out of date and we could already own businesses.

Chapter 5 - ? First i apologize for my English, and butchering it. Fortunately ,there is a spoiler tag to shield your eyes. Secondly, this is getting difficult to write. Perhaps honeymoon is over. Or i'm not angry enough. I'm not sure which. On a brighter note, i made lots of progress on the lore & town.

Thanks a lot. Interesting. I'll be honest, I write this to entertain myself, i'm not super serious. But I'm also just realizing the effort needed to entertain people as you say. Thank you for the discussion and the help. I appreciate it.

Thanks a lot, these are not only helpful hints, are also encouragements which i always appreciate. Thanks for reading, and i agree with what you said. Maybe i should kill her and replace her with me

Chapter 4- The vaults of Hivan Urgh, World Building I guess.

You are right, i assume you are mostly talking about the super serious tone and the weird reactionary sections being totally different. I will delete every modern terminology here after i finished and replace those as best as i could . I dislike those a lot myself. Other than that i'm not totally disappointed. Plot needs a bit work though. This story won't take place during modern times if and where i can manage, switching to medieval stuff is way more interesting. Factions, and a realistic world, i like those. Hmmm, Its not so difficult to make up some plot, though that's really doesn't seem like something absolutely necessary at this time. To me at least. I don't know...

Chapter 2- Unnamed (Edited some and some additions)

Here's a bit of extra, i planned this tidbit for today, yet somehow forget. Encounter with a mayor.

Chapter 3 I was hoping for a lot more content, maybe next week..

We have this massive library at where i live, every once in a while I go in, sniff a book out then read a few paragraphs, mostly i'm disappointed, but sometimes there is a book and it grabs my attention, usually the poem books/ analysis or the super technical neurobiology/social studies etc.. anything interesting. Sometimes for me author gets it right while he is not looking. This kind of scavenging is sad and funny at the same time but its the only kind of reading i (can) do. What you said about logic, you may have a point there, but i don't think that's very important. I'd rather see a super symmetrical plot narrated in ridiculous ravings than a solid logic. Though if its steel solid not only its a style hard to achieve that's also kind of interesting on its own. (not technical ofc).

Seems to be an extremely short book. 50 pages? All the better. Got the PDF *cough*, i'll have a look. ???? Thanks for the suggestion. Edit: Forgot to add, i have no problem with feminism not really, it was irresponsible for me to add the tag. I'm on the side of woman for whatever the issue is. I just didn't want to add more serious/political tags.

Yeah, kinda. These kind of stuff is not very unique. Shows like Orville or American Dad does the same thing very well. If it can turn out to be more unique than that i'll be happy.

If only it was Mur, i used to paint entire white paper orange with those pastels then carve it with a knife for the art hours. I was fan of Netherlands for 10 years, cause they used orange on their flag. Still didn't recover from their loss at World Cup to Spain.

I like this answer, noted the degree, very interesting actually i was thinking she was a retired teacher. LOL. A warning, this novel can't be cool like your art bro. I simply can't draw ever since elementary school no reason to think otherwise for any other. I always like the color orange for some reason though.

Thank you for saying so. I'd just think a good line from time to time or a setting, and i'm not good with dialogues. It's very difficult for me to write normal stuff, not only its boring, i'm bad at it. I'd just think a quote i like (religion is like woman you can never find the depth of either) then let the feeling guide me. Mind that its not the woman here it could as well be the man, i just like the intensity of the person saying it and what caused him to say this. Possibly, maybe. Like i said, If i write normal characters or stuff, i have to normalize them, which is ehm... boring. I realize certain kind of effort must go into a story, and saying stuff like "its boring" is anathema to some in the art society, yet i write this for myself, so i can laugh and feel good when i read. And others if they do so all the better.

Chapter 2 - un named (This is not complete. I couldn't resist to wait until Sunday when i'd planned) Thanks for the comments.

I'm confused as well. I just wrote this for the laughs tbh, you might have noticed grammar mistakes, punctuation errors etc.. This just means i'm super impatient about this character and story. I always wanted to create a super romantic, epic artpiece. Yet real life is often not what one hopes for. I'd almost always want to "show rather than tell" the rest is details. I don't mean to confuse people with super epic, difficult to follow writing style or switching characters after every chapter. I hate those kind of styles. It definitely does. Yet it doesn't. I don't know, i try to get a handle on bs, with me its not easy at best.

Well, its an exaggeration no doubt. Most art is kind of like that otherwise its just plain copying. I really like Nabokov for example but as a writer being superbly talented aside he is too honest for me.. For this woman I'm thinking someone like "Howard's mother" from BBT. Once you know that kind of person, you can never forget it. And you can never explain it. I'm bitter yes but i want to explain the unexplainable, her thought process. You might also have noticed i have a massive grudge for the left field. ehm.. that's not the issue here. You are right about one thing i'm bitter, that's not critical or even important for me here. Also if i take a look an objective view like you said, it wouldn't be it funny, it would turn out she was right about her actions. But who cares? I don't.