Revise, edit, and rewrite it redneck. As it is, it is riddled with spelling and grammar mistakes. Mix up your vocabulary. Instead of research, try examine or use a thesauraus. They help spruce things up.
Again, you know Nothing about the inhabitants(if any) of the Tribunals. Why not search the giant castle for hidden passages.
Work on it redneck and you might be able to get an alliance. ( it will take enormous ammounts of work and if you are not up to it, stop here)